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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
A letter to correct
Could you help me and correct the folloing letter?
Dear Kate!
How are you doing? Sorry, I haven;t written for so long.
Last week , on 23 rd April 2o12 I was on a birthday party with my close friend. My friend and I were decorating the ballroom with balloons.
We started decorating at 10 am and finished three hours later.
We were very tired but it was an interesting experience to face. The balloons were red, yellow and blue. There were twenty of them.
During the party, one of the guests broke their leg- it was a woman. It was a terrible view. It happened while she was dancing.
All the guests were terrified and didn't know what to do. Then one of them called for a doctor.
Fortunately all ended well. All participants of the party were satisfied with it.
I had fun, the music was fantastic and the food delicious.
Write soon.
See you!
XYZ
Dear Kate!
How are you doing? Sorry, I haven;t written for so long.
Last week , on 23 rd April 2o12 I was on a birthday party with my close friend. My friend and I were decorating the ballroom with balloons.
We started decorating at 10 am and finished three hours later.
We were very tired but it was an interesting experience to face. The balloons were red, yellow and blue. There were twenty of them.
During the party, one of the guests broke their leg- it was a woman. It was a terrible view. It happened while she was dancing.
All the guests were terrified and didn't know what to do. Then one of them called for a doctor.
Fortunately all ended well. All participants of the party were satisfied with it.
I had fun, the music was fantastic and the food delicious.
Write soon.
See you!
XYZ
Top answer
Here is how I would say it (note that I am bunching your sentences into paragraphs and setting them off by spaces): Dear Kate: How are you doing? Sorry, I haven't written for so long. Last week, on April 23rd, I was at a birthday party with my close friend.
- Here is how I would say it (note that I am bunching your sentences into paragraphs and setting them off by spaces): Dear Kate: How are you doing?
- Sorry, I haven't written for so long.
- Last week, on April 23rd, I was at a birthday party with my close friend.
- My friend and I were decorating the ballroom with red, yellow, and blue balloons.
- We started decorating at 10 am and finished three hours later.
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Here is how I would say it (note that I am bunching your sentences into paragraphs and setting them off by spaces):
Dear Kate:
How are you doing? Sorry, I haven't written for so long.
Last week, on April 23rd, I was at a birthday party with my close friend. My friend and I were decorating the ballroom with red, yellow, and blue balloons. We started decorating
Dear Kate:
How are you doing? Sorry, I haven't written for so long.
Last week, on April 23rd, I was at a birthday party with my close friend. My friend and I were decorating the ballroom with red, yellow, and blue balloons. We started decorating
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