A letter for bussiness cooporation

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Hi,
My name is Stephanie and I the office manager at White Stone studio. We are a Waterloo based studio providing wedding photography services at our two branches located at Woodbridge and Newtown.

Right now we are planning a bridal photo shoot in association with Wedlove Inc., which will be featured in bridal magazines and blogs. The model is an agency approved model from 4Management, Wedding dress is provided by Wedlove Inc. and floral design, accessories and probes are Blossom design.

We came across Gothic Creek by one our clients who asked us to photograph her at your location and soon after we considered your location as our first choice to do the bridal photo shoot for its raw and intimate characteristics.
All the involved parties are providing their talent and services for free in exchange of professional photos which are captured on medium and large format film cameras. Also capturing some aesthetic interior and exterior images of the location is one of priorities (free of charge).

This will be a powerful and effective way to increase the fame of Gothic Creek. We look forward to working with you on this exciting project.

Sincerely yours,

Stephanie,
Office manager