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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

A Letter

Hello and Happy New Year!

Could you please correct my letter?

Dear Sir

Having heard of your magazine, I wish to submit my short stories to your magazine.

or I decided to submit my short stories to your magazine?

Please furnish me with all necessary information as regards the submission guidlines.

I would like to know what I as a writer am supposed to pay for?

(Isn't it a mistake to say would you please let me know if there are any fees I should pay for? Or I am supposed to pay for?

While hoping and waiting for a favorable reply, I am thanking you in advance for your help(should I use another word here?).

Thanks

Is sincerely necessary to use here?
  

Top answer

Dear Sir, Having heard of your magazine (I would put where you heard about them. ) I wish to submit my short stories for possible publication. Please send me information regarding your submission guidelines.

— Eslnewbie

  • Dear Sir, Having heard of your magazine (I would put where you heard about them.
  • ) I wish to submit my short stories for possible publication.
  • Please send me information regarding your submission guidelines.
  • Also, are there any fees that I, as a writer, would be required to pay?
  • Thank you in advance for your help.
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Dear Sir,

Having heard of your magazine (I would put where you heard about them. Could be of interest and a nice ice breaker.) I wish to submit my short stories for possible publication.

Please send me information regarding your submission guidelines.

Also, are there any fees that I, as a writer, would be required to pay?

Thank you in advance for your help.
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