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QazBomber Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

A letter

I'm spanish, and a english student. I have to write a letter for a Belgian teen, and I have to correct it. Please, If you can help me, there aren't any emoticon that can express my gratitude. This is the letter:

Hello!



My name’s Diego and I am a boy. I’m 15 years old. I love surfing on the Internet, reading, writing stories, making models (especially planes models) and playing computer games. I like going out with my friends to walk and go to the disco. I’m thin, and not very tall. Usually, I’ve got short, spiky hair.

Before, I practiced Karate and swimming, but now I am not doing any sport.

I live with my family: father, mother and my brother, that is ten years old. My father works in an important Spanish food company. My mother is a housewife.

I study E.S.O. (Compulsory Secondary Education) in a state and mixed school. We have three terms; at the end of the first and second terms we have partials tests, and at the end of the third term we have global exams. But everyday we take exams.

As I’ve told you before, I live with my family in , a province of ‘Castilla y León’, autonomous region of . is a historical city, which was born in the XI century approximately. is a very beautiful city; it’s in the north-centre of , and it has much importance in . ‘Castilla y León’ was divided into two kingdoms really, but they united in 1035. ‘Castilla’ was a very important kingdom and region of the world: it expanded its territory to (when Christopher Columbus discovered the new continent, thanks to the kings of and for their help) and the north of . ‘Castilla y León’ is famous for the castles and the win.

And…, that’s all for now.



Best Regards

I am looking forward to receiving your letter,



Diego

Thanks!
Bye!
  

Top answer

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. This is a pretty good letter. I've made a number of corrections and changes.

  • Hi, Welcome to the Forum.
  • This is a pretty good letter.
  • I've made a number of corrections and changes.
  • Best wishes, Clive Hello!
  • My name’s Diego and I am a boy.
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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

This is a pretty good letter. I've made a number of corrections and changes.

Best wishes, Clive

Hello!

My name’s Diego and I am a boy. I’m 15 years old. I love surfing on the Internet, reading, writing stories, making models (especially model planes) and playing computer games.
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Thanks Clive, I am been thankful to you. Yeah, Thanks!

ByE!

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