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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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A jewellery magazine front cover headline

Special offers inside to make you beautiful outside.............. How can we improve on it keeping the essence of the meaning
  

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Actually, it sounds fine to me as it is.

  • Actually, it sounds fine to me as it is.
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Actually, it sounds fine to me as it is.
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