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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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A happy Trip

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Last Saturday, my friends an I went for a holiday trip. I woke up very early I the morning to get ready for the holiday trip. After I got ready, my father took me to school. I arrived at school at about 6.30 am.

There were only a few people in school when I reached. I was bored waiting for my friends. So, I played my Gameboy while waiting. After awhile, many of my friends arrived. We played together while waiting for the bus.

When the bus arrived, the teacher in-charge took attendance while we lined up to get on the bus. There were almost fifty students joining the trip. After everyone was ready, we set off to our destination. On the way, some of us talked, played and slept in the bus.

On the way, we stopped at a rest stop. There were many food stalls, smalls shops and book shops. We went to the toilet first. Then, we went to buy food. I forgot to bring my money, so I borrowed money from my friend. I remembered we waited so long to buy nasi lemak. Finally, we decided to buy some sweets and junk food.

After that, we went to a crystal factory. The crystal factory was very big. We saw the workers shapping the crystals into many beautiful shapes. Then, we went home later with enjoyable memory.
  

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