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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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a good thesis

Could you please check to see if this is a good thesis statement, I'm having trouble with this:

Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and fiction where Modernist treated storytelling as a way to emphasis the truth of given events.
  

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Do you mean: "Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and fiction where modernists treated storytelling as a way to emphasize the truth of given events". or "Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and fiction whereas modernists treated storytelling as a way to emphasize the truth of given events".

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  • Do you mean: "Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and fiction where modernists treated storytelling as a way to emphasize the truth of given events".
  • or "Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and fiction whereas modernists treated storytelling as a way to emphasize the truth of given events".
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Do you mean:

"Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and fiction where modernists treated storytelling as a way to emphasize the truth of given events".

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"Tim O’ Brien challenges the idea that storytelling blurs the line between truth and ficti
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