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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A good place to go

Please check out the following paragraph.

1. I went to Keelung two weeks ago.

2. It is the northest city in Taiwan, and it is also a city where my grandparents live in.

3. I like to visit the night market there the most.

4. However, it could be better if Keelung doesn't rain a lot.

5. Still, I love there very much.

6. The visiting to Keeling made me happy.

7. It is a good place to go.
  

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If it is a paragraph, then please format it as a paragraph, contiluo. We get a false image if it is presented as a series of isolated sentences. Part of the skill of writing is the ability to interlock sentences into a cohesive paragraph.

  • If it is a paragraph, then please format it as a paragraph, contiluo.
  • We get a false image if it is presented as a series of isolated sentences.
  • Part of the skill of writing is the ability to interlock sentences into a cohesive paragraph.
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If it is a paragraph, then please format it as a paragraph, contiluo. We get a false image if it is presented as a series of isolated sentences. Part of the skill of writing is the ability to interlock sentences into a cohesive paragraph.
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I went to Keelung two weeks ago. It is the northest city in Taiwan, and it is also a city where my grandparents live in. I like to visit the night market there the most. However, it could be better if Keelung doesn't rain a lot. Still, I love there very much. The visiting to Keelung made me happy. It's a good place to go.
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Thank you. Much better!

I went to Keelung, the northernmost city in Taiwan, two weeks ago. My grandparents live there, and I like to visit the night market a lot. However, it would be better if Keelung didn't have so much rain. Still, I love the city very much, and visiting Keelung always makes me happy. It's a great place.

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