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A giant gorilla
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I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week. The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend. Because the young woman had to go back to America, so she hid the gorrila in a special zoo in America. But the gorilla didn't like the zoo and wanted to escape, also some hunters had tried to kill it many times. So the gorilla decided to ran away from the zoo, and everyone couldn't find it. Finally, the young woman found the gorilla and stopped the hunters killing it. And she gave it a warm safe home.
I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week. The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend. Because the young woman had to go back to America, so she hid the gorrila in a special zoo in America. But the gorilla didn't like the zoo and wanted to escape, also some hunters had tried to kill it many times. So the gorilla decided to ran away from the zoo, and everyone couldn't find it. Finally, the young woman found the gorilla and stopped the hunters killing it. And she gave it a warm safe home.
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I have underlined some problems: I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week. The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend. Because the young woman had to go back to America, so she hid the gorrila in a special zoo in America.
- I have underlined some problems: I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week.
- The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend.
- Because the young woman had to go back to America, so she hid the gorrila in a special zoo in America.
- But the gorilla didn't like the zoo and wanted to escap e, als o some hunters had tried to kill it many times.
- So the gorilla decided to ran away from the zoo, and everyone couldn't find it.
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I have underlined some problems:
I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week. The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend. Because the young woman had to go back to America, so she hid the gorrila in a special zoo in America. But the gorilla didn't like the zoo and wanted to escape, also some hunters had tried t
I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week. The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend. Because the young woman had to go back to America, so she hid the gorrila in a special zoo in America. But the gorilla didn't like the zoo and wanted to escape, also some hunters had tried t
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I watched a movie about a giant gorilla last week. The movie was talking about a young woman who became the gorilla's friend. Because the young woman had to go back to America, she hid the gorilla in a special zoo in America. But the gorilla didn't like the zoo and wanted to escape, and some hunters tried to kill it many times. So the gorilla decided to run away
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