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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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A garage man

Please check the following paragraph.

This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. His career is a garage man. He always washes cars. He works hard, and he is never lazy. But he is very jealous of people better than him. He is also clearly loving and hating, and indomitable, so he always gets into trouble.
  

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contiluo This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. His career is a garage man. He always washes cars.

  • contiluo This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio.
  • His career is a garage man.
  • He always washes cars.
  • He works hard, and he is never lazy.
  • But he is very jealous of people who are better than him.
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contiluoThis is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. His career is a garage man. He always washes cars. He works hard, and he is never lazy. But he is very jealous of people who are better than him. He is also clearly loving and hating, and indomitable, so he always gets into trouble.
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