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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
A formal letter
Hi, guys. Will you please help me to check whether the letter has any mistakes or no?
Hello, dear Aurelia Szathmar.
My name is Roman. I'm writing to you about your application "Spider Guy".
I liked playing it, thank you!
But being a Russian-speaking user, I've noticed that the description of your application was copied from the Google Translate to the letter. Unfortunately, it doesn't contribute to the good presentation of your product. Translation by Google leaves much to be desired.
I am a future practicing translator. And now I am starting a company which translates Andriod and I-phone applications in 3 languages: Russian, English and German.
Would you like to have your application and the description to it translated properly, so that the Russian or German users would enjoy playing it in their native languages?
Thank you for taking this into consideration. Please respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
My name
Hello, dear Aurelia Szathmar.
My name is Roman. I'm writing to you about your application "Spider Guy".
I liked playing it, thank you!
But being a Russian-speaking user, I've noticed that the description of your application was copied from the Google Translate to the letter. Unfortunately, it doesn't contribute to the good presentation of your product. Translation by Google leaves much to be desired.
I am a future practicing translator. And now I am starting a company which translates Andriod and I-phone applications in 3 languages: Russian, English and German.
Would you like to have your application and the description to it translated properly, so that the Russian or German users would enjoy playing it in their native languages?
Thank you for taking this into consideration. Please respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
My name
Top answer
Grammatically, this is fine. You need to formulate your paragraphs better, though.
- Grammatically, this is fine.
- You need to formulate your paragraphs better, though.
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Grammatically, this is fine. You need to formulate your paragraphs better, though.
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