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Todes Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
A formal letter
Can anyone check my letter?
The task is that I have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing the visitors around my city. Write a letter of application to the tourism office.
In the letter give your reasons for wanting the job; explain why you think you can do the job; describe any relevant experience you have.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have seen an advertisement for a job in the local newspaper.
I want this job, because I want to make people to be interested in the history of our city and to awake their desire to come back here. There is also true, that I need to pay for my Maths lessons and it is worth to have extra money.
I have been living here for 10 years and know every street, every corner and every story about this place. Also, I have studied the Tourism course in the university and I am really interested in this subject, that is why I have a huge desire to expand my knowledge.
I have had some experience with being a guide. For example, I showed the city for the hosts, who visited my university, from abroad. I always act as a tour guide for my friends and their friends. For these reasons I think I can do this job.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
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As I know when we start a letter with Dear Sir/Madam, we usually end it with Yours Faithfully. Though, in the English book for IELTS, the letter ends with Yours Sincerely. Isn't it the mistake?
The task is that I have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing the visitors around my city. Write a letter of application to the tourism office.
In the letter give your reasons for wanting the job; explain why you think you can do the job; describe any relevant experience you have.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have seen an advertisement for a job in the local newspaper.
I want this job, because I want to make people to be interested in the history of our city and to awake their desire to come back here. There is also true, that I need to pay for my Maths lessons and it is worth to have extra money.
I have been living here for 10 years and know every street, every corner and every story about this place. Also, I have studied the Tourism course in the university and I am really interested in this subject, that is why I have a huge desire to expand my knowledge.
I have had some experience with being a guide. For example, I showed the city for the hosts, who visited my university, from abroad. I always act as a tour guide for my friends and their friends. For these reasons I think I can do this job.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
...
As I know when we start a letter with Dear Sir/Madam, we usually end it with Yours Faithfully. Though, in the English book for IELTS, the letter ends with Yours Sincerely. Isn't it the mistake?
Top answer
Dear Sir/Madam, I have seen the advertisement for this job in the local newspaper. I want this job as I want to let people have interest in the history of our city and to awake their desire to come back here. It is also true that I need to pay for my Maths lessons and it is worth it to have extra money.
- Dear Sir/Madam, I have seen the advertisement for this job in the local newspaper.
- I want this job as I want to let people have interest in the history of our city and to awake their desire to come back here.
- It is also true that I need to pay for my Maths lessons and it is worth it to have extra money.
- I have been living here for 10 years and I know every street, every corner and every story about this place.
- Also, I have studied the Tourism course in the university and I am really interested in this subject, that is why I have a huge desire to expand my knowledge.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I have seen the advertisement for this job in the local newspaper.
I want this job as I want to let people have interest in the history of our city and to awake their desire to come back here.It is also true that I need to pay for my Maths lessons and it is worth it to have extra money.
I have been living here for 10
I have seen the advertisement for this job in the local newspaper.
I want this job as I want to let people have interest in the history of our city and to awake their desire to come back here.It is also true that I need to pay for my Maths lessons and it is worth it to have extra money.
I have been living here for 10
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Oh, thanks.
By the way, we say 'the advertisement' in this case (not 'an advertisement'), because the addressee and I, we both, exactly know what advertisement I talk about, right?
By the way, we say 'the advertisement' in this case (not 'an advertisement'), because the addressee and I, we both, exactly know what advertisement I talk about, right?
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