A foreign English learner needs your editing on his letter (reply from the girl)

0 The following is the reply from my pen friend. 02br
00I got her consent to post her letter here (with her personal particular, if any, removed or substituted). 02br
00Any comments on the whole or part of the letter will be appreciated. 02br
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00Hi, 02br
00I don't think I did very well in this exam because I was really not well prepared. 02br
00I guess the result will just be so-so. 02br
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00Most of the subjects I applied for were art & design related. 02br
00But I think I like Geography and Architecture more, so I chose them as my band one choices. 02br
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00I plan to go to visit Korea at the end of this month with my friend after she finished the oral exam. 02br
00Have you ever been to Korea? Is this destination a good choice? 02br
00I've never visited places that are out of the Hong Kong boundary except Mainland China. 02br
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00I'm worrying what I can do if I fail in this exam and can't study in the university. The future really bothers me much.... shall I work? Or shall I continue studying? 02br
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00Tutoring those little boys & girls is really a troublesome job. They try every effort to escape from the tasks I give them. But sometimes I do play and draw picture with them. Am I naughty? They are so cutes! 02br
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00Finally, I hope you can visit my website very soon~ 02br
00Bye~~ 0-