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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A football match
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Ryan was an addicted of football. He did not miss any games on Tv. It was a fine Friday afternoon last week. He invited his friend, John, to a stadium nearby to watch a game.
There was a football match. It started at /at about 5.15 pm. The match was between Perak (team) and Kedah (team). Ryan and John were supporters for Perak (team). They started shouting and cheering for it when the game started. It was really / trutly an exciting and interesting.
It lasted almost for / lasted for almost 2 hours. At the end / In the end, Perak (team) was a winning team. They won the game by 4-1 and got a trophy from Mayor. Ryan and John were pleased and went home with joy
Ryan was an addicted of football. He did not miss any games on Tv. It was a fine Friday afternoon last week. He invited his friend, John, to a stadium nearby to watch a game.
There was a football match. It started at /at about 5.15 pm. The match was between Perak (team) and Kedah (team). Ryan and John were supporters for Perak (team). They started shouting and cheering for it when the game started. It was really / trutly an exciting and interesting.
It lasted almost for / lasted for almost 2 hours. At the end / In the end, Perak (team) was a winning team. They won the game by 4-1 and got a trophy from Mayor. Ryan and John were pleased and went home with joy
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15; Perak vs Kedah. Ryan and John supported Perak and cheered them on. it was enthralling to wathch them.
- 15; Perak vs Kedah.
- Ryan and John supported Perak and cheered them on.
- it was enthralling to wathch them.
- The game lasted for nearly two hours, in the end Perak won 4-1.
- The Mayor presented Perak with a trophy which pleased Ryan and John who went home full of joy.
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Ryan was addicted to...................it was a fine afternoon last friday..when he invited his friend John to a nearby stadium to watch a game,
The match started at 5.15; Perak vs Kedah. Ryan and John supported Perak and cheered them on. it was enthralling to wathch them.
The game lasted for nearly two hours, in the end Perak won 4-1. The Mayor presented Perak with a trophy whi
The match started at 5.15; Perak vs Kedah. Ryan and John supported Perak and cheered them on. it was enthralling to wathch them.
The game lasted for nearly two hours, in the end Perak won 4-1. The Mayor presented Perak with a trophy whi
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