0
Neganiga Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing

A follow up letter for university

I am trying to follow-up my request to univeristy. Could you please correct my writing? Thank you

Dear Ms. Amber

I am writing to follow up my request for deffering commencement. I had sent my email in December 12, 2016 to Email Removed and Email Removed [Incident: 161221-000043]. I request to differ my commencement to Semester 2 (July, 2017)
Due to the deadline for my conditional offer is in December 30, 2016, I wish to hear the result of my request soon. Thank you

Sincerely,
  

Top answer

I am writing to follow up my request for deferring commencement. I sent an email on December 12, 2016 to Email Removed and Email Removed [Incident: 161221-000043] in which I requested that my commencement be deferred to Semester 2 (July, 2017) Because the deadline for approving these deferments is December 30, 2016, I would like an update on the status of my request soon. Thank you

  • I am writing to follow up my request for deferring commencement.
  • I sent an email on December 12, 2016 to Email Removed and Email Removed [Incident: 161221-000043] in which I requested that my commencement be deferred to Semester 2 (July, 2017) Because the deadline for approving these deferments is December 30, 2016, I would like an update on the status of my request soon.
  • Thank you
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
I am writing to follow up my request for deferring commencement. I sent an email on December 12, 2016 to Email Removed and Email Removed [Incident: 161221-000043] in which I requested that my commencement be deferred to Semester 2 (July, 2017)
Because the deadline for approving these deferments is December 30, 2016, I would like an update on the status of my request soon. Thank

Related Questions