A fighting with a snake

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It was a windy day evening. There were some children playing football in the field. Kim and his friends joined them / joined with them playing happily. One of the boys kicked the ball in / into the bushes. Then, he ran to get it.

Suddenly, he heard a hissing sound from the bushes. When (he was) walking nearer, he was shocked. There was a snake hiding in it. The boy screamed loudly (for help).

Luckily, a passer-by came to help him. The man beat it with a stick and tried to let it go away. After fighting (with a snake )for a short while, he successfully killed it. The man told the children stayed away from the bushes and to be careful next time.