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Could you help me please? Are these sentences correct?
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Mrs Brown worked as a German teacher for the training-linguistic centre 'Acquisition' in kindergartens no. 1,2,3,5 and 7 in Paris from October 2010 to June 2011.
Mrs Brown is a reliable, diligent and committed person, who carries out her duties thoroughly.
Our learners acquire German vocabulary in an active, natural and carefree way.
Great independence in carrying out the assigned tasks renders Mrs Brown an ideal employee, identifying with her work and deeply involved in her duties .
Thank you for your help!
Kind regards.
Could you help me please? Are these sentences correct?
I would really appreciate your help.
Mrs Brown worked as a German teacher for the training-linguistic centre 'Acquisition' in kindergartens no. 1,2,3,5 and 7 in Paris from October 2010 to June 2011.
Mrs Brown is a reliable, diligent and committed person, who carries out her duties thoroughly.
Our learners acquire German vocabulary in an active, natural and carefree way.
Great independence in carrying out the assigned tasks renders Mrs Brown an ideal employee, identifying with her work and deeply involved in her duties .
Thank you for your help!
Kind regards.
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Mrs Brown worked as a German teacher for the 'Acquisition' Training-Linguistic Centre in Kindergarten Nos. 1, 2, 3, 5 and 7 in Paris from October 2010 to June 2011. ) Mrs Brown is a reliable, diligent and committed teacher who carries out her duties thoroughly.
- Mrs Brown worked as a German teacher for the 'Acquisition' Training-Linguistic Centre in Kindergarten Nos.
- 1, 2, 3, 5 and 7 in Paris from October 2010 to June 2011.
- ) Mrs Brown is a reliable, diligent and committed teacher who carries out her duties thoroughly.
- Our learners acquire German vocabulary in an active, natural and relaxed way.
- Mrs Brown is a self-starter and her initiative makes he r an ideal employee .
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Mrs Brown worked as a German teacher for the 'Acquisition' Training-Linguistic Centre in Kindergarten Nos. 1, 2, 3, 5 and 7 in Paris from October 2010 to June 2011. (I saw your earlier thread, but I think the name is more common the way I have revised it.)
Mrs Brown is a reliable, diligent and committed teacher who carries out her duties thorough
Mrs Brown is a reliable, diligent and committed teacher who carries out her duties thorough
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