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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

A few sentences to correct

Hello,
Could you please help me with the following sentences:
Describing a photo, can we say :
1) I spot, I notice...(or should we say I have spotted, have noticed, etc.)
2) I can see four people. They are sitting in a kitchen.
( do we use ‘the' only if we mean our kitchen - a precise room: ‘Iam here..in the kitchen!)
Describing a chart:
3) We can see that the number was increasing/ increased in cold seasons - winter and autumn.
4) All my family members mean '(the) home' for me
5) They have to cope with various problems: lack of money, a house and food.
6) The number of the homeless in American shelters was increasing because the conditions in municipal shelters were getting better.
7) They are able to organize actions to collect money for building/ to build new shelters
8) The majority of the homeless die because they freeze over during cold seasons, we cannot permit it any more.
9) Thank you for your last/latest letter
10) You can read about it in the newspaper ‘The sun'.
11) I am very interested/curious whether you will share my opinion.
Thank you for your help,
Julie
  

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Hello, Julie. I have answered some of your concerns, but you have not answered several yourself. )-- I spot every day ; I spotted yesterday .

  • Hello, Julie.
  • I have answered some of your concerns, but you have not answered several yourself.
  • )-- I spot every day ; I spotted yesterday .
  • 2) I can see four people.
  • They are sitting in a kitchen.
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Hello, Julie. I have answered some of your concerns, but you have not answered several yourself.

1) I spot, I notice...(or should we say I have spotted, have noticed, etc.)-- I spot every day; I spotted yesterday.
2) I can see four people. They are sitting in a kitchen.
( do we use ‘the' only if we mean our kitchen - a precise room: ‘Iam here..in the
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Thank you very much.
As for the rest of the sentences, I would say:
Describing a chart:
3) We can see that the number increased in cold seasons - winter and autumn.

6) The number of homeless in American shelters is increasing because the conditions in municipal shelters are getting better.
I am describing a graph, I would say, fo
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3) We can see that the number increased in cold seasons - winter and autumn.--OK

6) From 2001 until 2005 the number of homeless was increasing because the conditions in municipal shelters were getting better. --OK

I would also like to know why we can't say 'the homeless' in this case, I am talking about of group of people, so I have thought that 'the h

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