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Hi, Can you correct these sentences for me? Are there any better way to say them? Thank you. Are you leaving? Yes. I'm heading home nowI walk a person to a room and no one at the desk to talk to her. I say, "When you come back, you can wait until someone call you"When is the first day I can sign up or are you going to send out an email?the close button in some elevator do make it close faster.my card work in the same way as yours.When are you available until?Are you contracted with the school to teach every 2 students every month?Can I talk to her or Can I speak to her?How more longer will we finish this training? I have to leave soon.

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mezzopiano Hi, Can you correct these sentences for me? Are there any better way to say them? Thank you.
Are you leaving? Yes. I'm heading home now. Correct
I walk a person to a room and no one at the desk to talk to her. I say,This is not clear.
"When you come back, you can/should/need to/must wait until someone calls you"
I think you mean this:
When am I going to sign up or receive an email from you?
The "close" button in some elevators makes them close quicker.
My card work is at the same stage as yours.
When are you available until? How long/till when are you here?
Are you contracted to teach 2 students in the school every month?
Can I talk to her? Correct. We use "talk" when the conversation is more on the informal side.
or Can I speak to her? Correct. We use "speak" when the conversation is formal. And, there are a few more important differences. You can see them here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/speak-or-talk
How much longer will this training last? I have to leave soon.

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