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There's so much I've seen on this trip but by far what stands out the most has been the camera ride within the safari desert. As these majestic creatures carry us on their humps trotting along the sand dunes of the neverending safari hills the only thing I can think of is how magnificent our earth is and how wrong I've been to have thought to have experienced it all!
There's so much I've seen on this trip, but by far what stands out the most has been the camel ride in the safari desert. As these majestic creatures carried us on their humps, trotting along the sand dunes of the never-ending safari, the only thing I could think of was how magnificent our earth is and how wrong I've been to have thought I had previously experienced it all! Nice work!
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There's so much I've seen on this trip, but by far what stands out the most has been the camel ride in the safari desert. As these majestic creatures carried us