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Self correct: We're in a world where everything is so rushed and money driven that we sometimes forget to stop and be grateful for the small invaluable moments in life and to cherish the friends that have been there for you thru thick and thin. Thank you for your support my brother James!
- Self correct: We're in a world where everything is so rushed and money driven that we sometimes forget to stop and be grateful for the small invaluable moments in life and to cherish the friends that have been there for you thru thick and thin.
- Thank you for your support my brother James!
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We're in a world where everything is so rushed and money driven that we sometimes forget to stop and be grateful for the small invaluable moments in life and to cherish the friends that have been there for you thru thick and thin. Thank you for your support my brother James!
0...that have been there for you through thick and thin.
...we sometimes forget to stop and be grateful for the small invaluable moments in life and to cherish the friends... It's a bit wordy. I would try to rephrase it to make it more compact. I would use "who" instead of "that," and it is a mistake to start off writing using "we," and then switch to "you."
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