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Levis1 Posted 8 years ago
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Please proofread: I've stayed at this Holiday Inn many times before, but this time has been my longest stay, and I have only good things to say about my experience. The price was very reasonable for a one week stay, especially since breakfast was included for two guests( me and a friend). The gym facility hasn't changed and has all the workout equipments you need. The only one thing I'd really like for them to improve on is the general attitude from the bellhops, but it's China, so I don't expect too much when it comes to customer service. Doesn't help that there's no tipping culture here, but that's not something I'm going to stop doing just because I'm in a different country.

  

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I've stayed at this Holiday Inn many times, but this time has been my longest stay, and I have only good things to say about my experience. The price was very reasonable for a one week stay, especially since breakfast was included. (((The motel is hardly going to give breakfast to the husband but not to the wife.

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  • I've stayed at this Holiday Inn many times, but this time has been my longest stay, and I have only good things to say about my experience.
  • The price was very reasonable for a one week stay, especially since breakfast was included.
  • (((The motel is hardly going to give breakfast to the husband but not to the wife.
  • ))) The gym facility hasn't changed and has all the workout equipment you need.
  • The only one thing I'd really like for them to improve on is the general attitude from the bellhops ; but it's China, so I don't expect too much when it comes to customer service.
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I've stayed at this Holiday Inn many times, but this time has been my longest stay, and I have only good things to say about my experience. The price was very reasonable for a one week stay, especially since breakfast was included. (((The motel is hardly going to give breakfast to the husband but not to the wife. you but not a friend!))) The gym facility has

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... but not to the wife / you but not a friend!)))


Missed something: "The one thing..." or " The only thing..." but not " " The only one thing..."

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