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Levis1 Posted 9 years ago
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Is this OK: The damage was done sometime last year when they were repaving the concrete on the third floor balcony. I don't remember when, but I do recall someone forcibly pushing on the door and that's when the latch came off the wall. As for the spitting, there's no way the stains on the ground is from me, but I'll see what I can do to cover them up.

  

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Here are some edits. The damage was done sometime last year when they were repaving the third floor balcony with concrete. I don't remember when, but I do recall someone forcibly pushing on the door and that's when the latch came off the wall.

  • Here are some edits.
  • The damage was done sometime last year when they were repaving the third floor balcony with concrete.
  • I don't remember when, but I do recall someone forcibly pushing on the door and that's when the latch came off the wall.
  • As for the spitting, there's no way the stains on the ground are from me, but I'll see what I can do to cover them up.
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Here are some edits.

The damage was done sometime last year when they were repaving the third floor balcony with concrete. I don't remember when, but I do recall someone forcibly pushing on the door and that's when the latch came off the wall. As for the spitting, there's no way the stains on the ground are from me, but I'll see what I can do to cover them up.

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