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Knightofsports Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

A few sentences

Could you please send the face mask to the address below after you're done with it? I will incur the shipping costs. Please email me upon shipment delivery so I can notify the receiver. Thank you very much!

Please proofread.

Thanks!
  

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It sounds alright except that in the first sentence, the phrase, after you're done with it, actually refers to the most recent noun, which is the address, not the mask. To avoid this, you could rephrase it as After you've finished with the face mask, could you please send it to the address below? Also, I'm not sure exactly what you mean by face mask.

— Elanguest

  • It sounds alright except that in the first sentence, the phrase, after you're done with it, actually refers to the most recent noun, which is the address, not the mask.
  • To avoid this, you could rephrase it as After you've finished with the face mask, could you please send it to the address below?
  • Also, I'm not sure exactly what you mean by face mask.
  • If you are referring to cosmetics, it would be something funny to return after use.
  • If you're referring to a costume, you can just say mask.
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It sounds alright except that in the first sentence, the phrase, after you're done with it, actually refers to the most recent noun, which is the address, not the mask. To avoid this, you could rephrase it as After you've finished with the face mask, could you please send it to the address below? Also, I'm not sure exactly what you mean by face mask. If you are referring to co
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ElanguestIt sounds alright except that in the first sentence, the phrase, after you're done with it, actually refers to the most recent noun, which is the address, not the mask. To avoid this, you could rephrase it as After you've finished with the face mask, could you please send it to the address below? Also, I'm not sure exactly what you mean by face mask. If you are r
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ElanguestNo problem.
Does this sentence makes sense?

Could you please send the face mask after you're done with it to the address below.

Thank you.
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Mmm, it's sounds a bit clumsy... Maybe this would be better:

When you're done with the mask, could you please send it to the address below?
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ElanguestMmm, it's sounds a bit clumsy... Maybe this would be better:When you're done with the mask, could you please send it to the address below?
Thanks again!
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