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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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A few sentences

hey. is this gramatically correct?

1. However, a person grows up, becomes more and more mature, gains knowledge, gets experience and suddenly everything in this world for him seems to be so normal and obvious that it goes without saying.

2. One should be very brave to wake up in the morning, get out of bed and, with unquestionable aim, leave home where mother silently writes letters, father keeps bees in a glass beehive and maid cleans every corner of the house. Searching for a truth requires a lot of strength, even if you are older than seven.

3. She is not going to betray the one she believes in or to renounce what she was searching for.
  

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Some suggestions: 1. However, a child grows up, matures , gains knowledge and experience , and eventually everything in the world seems so normal and obvious to him that it goes without saying. 2.

  • Some suggestions: 1.
  • However, a child grows up, matures , gains knowledge and experience , and eventually everything in the world seems so normal and obvious to him that it goes without saying.
  • 2.
  • One must be very brave to wake up in the morning, get out of bed and with indefatigable zeal ( This is just a suggestion; 'unquestionable aim' is not right ) leave a home where Mother silently writes letters, Father keeps bees in a glass beehive , and the maid cleans every corner.
  • Searching for truth requires a lot of strength, even if you are older than seven.
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Some suggestions:

1. However, a child grows up, matures, gains knowledge and experience, and eventually everything in the world seems so normal and obvious to him that it goes without saying.

2. One must be very brave to wake up in the morning, get out of bed and with indefatigable zeal (This is just a su

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