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Mr. Tom Posted 17 years ago
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A feeling of extreme discomfort gripped him, and he...

Hi

Do you find this sentence natural? Any suggestions are welcome.

A feeling of extreme discomfort gripped her, and she stood not knowing how to react.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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If it's in a novel, it's fine. I wouldn't say it in everyday conversation.

  • If it's in a novel, it's fine.
  • I wouldn't say it in everyday conversation.
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If it's in a novel, it's fine. I wouldn't say it in everyday conversation.

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