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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
A Fairy Tale!
The black tresses of Rupenzel slides down
The high walls of anxiety and passion
To bring the levels of intimacy
To a standing ovation of souls.
Desperately biting into the forbidden apple
Not knowing the repercussions of the witches
Snow white sleeps to be passionately kissed.
As the evening dances to serene music
Cinderella woos her prince
With a glass slipper, as love mesmerises.
All fairy tales with a lovely ending
Claim that love is all Divine
But no Prince ever came for me
Nor did I ever feel love’s ecstasy.
The high walls of anxiety and passion
To bring the levels of intimacy
To a standing ovation of souls.
Desperately biting into the forbidden apple
Not knowing the repercussions of the witches
Snow white sleeps to be passionately kissed.
As the evening dances to serene music
Cinderella woos her prince
With a glass slipper, as love mesmerises.
All fairy tales with a lovely ending
Claim that love is all Divine
But no Prince ever came for me
Nor did I ever feel love’s ecstasy.
Top answer
Hi Anita! Rapunzel's lovely tresses were golden unless she used hair colour!!
- Hi Anita!
- Rapunzel's lovely tresses were golden unless she used hair colour!!
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Hi Anita! Rapunzel's lovely tresses were golden unless she used hair colour!! 
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Thanks Benitha for pointing that out. I wonder how I missed that.
The golden tresses of Rupenzel slides down
The high walls of anxiety and passion
To bring the levels of intimacy
To a standing ovation of souls.
Desperately biting into the forbidden apple
Not knowing the repercussions of the witches
Snow white sleep
The golden tresses of Rupenzel slides down
The high walls of anxiety and passion
To bring the levels of intimacy
To a standing ovation of souls.
Desperately biting into the forbidden apple
Not knowing the repercussions of the witches
Snow white sleep
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Hello Anita
Just a couple of thoughts:
Rupenzel slides down ] > 'slide'. I think it's usually 'Rapunzel'; though maybe some versions use a different spelling.
Not knowing the repercussions of the witches] This is a very interesting line.
I'm inclined to think that black hair suits your Rapunzel, even though she does indeed usually have fair hair, as Benita
Just a couple of thoughts:
Rupenzel slides down ] > 'slide'. I think it's usually 'Rapunzel'; though maybe some versions use a different spelling.
Not knowing the repercussions of the witches] This is a very interesting line.
I'm inclined to think that black hair suits your Rapunzel, even though she does indeed usually have fair hair, as Benita
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Hi Anita!
MrP is right! Giving the popular fairy tales a little twist of your own (like Rapunzel with black hair) does sound different. You do need to change the last three lines of the poem. Do as MrP says. Make it more unusual than expected.
MrP is right! Giving the popular fairy tales a little twist of your own (like Rapunzel with black hair) does sound different. You do need to change the last three lines of the poem. Do as MrP says. Make it more unusual than expected.
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