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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
A factual narration
Can someone please check the grammar for the below tagline?
Slogan/Tagline
A factual narration of the National Museum of China’s century-old stories
Short Plot
A documentary to commemorate the 100th anniversary of the National Museum of China. Several precious relics will also be making their debut to the world.
Long Plot
A documentary to commemorate the 100th anniversary of the National Museum of China, this program presents the duties of the museum in cultural preservation and inheritance. Several precious relics will also be making their debut to the world.
Slogan/Tagline
A factual narration of the National Museum of China’s century-old stories
Short Plot
A documentary to commemorate the 100th anniversary of the National Museum of China. Several precious relics will also be making their debut to the world.
Long Plot
A documentary to commemorate the 100th anniversary of the National Museum of China, this program presents the duties of the museum in cultural preservation and inheritance. Several precious relics will also be making their debut to the world.
Top answer
Narration usually has to do with a series of events, so they can be a series of individual stories. Because taglines seldom are complete sentences, but instead rely on phrases, I think the ones you have suggested are good. In the ‘Long Plot’, the introductory clause at first appears to need a verb, but it is the definition of ‘this program’ and is OK.
- Narration usually has to do with a series of events, so they can be a series of individual stories.
- Because taglines seldom are complete sentences, but instead rely on phrases, I think the ones you have suggested are good.
- In the ‘Long Plot’, the introductory clause at first appears to need a verb, but it is the definition of ‘this program’ and is OK.
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Narration usually has to do with a series of events, so they can be a series of individual stories. Because taglines seldom are complete sentences, but instead rely on phrases, I think the ones you have suggested are good. In the ‘Long Plot’, the introductory clause at first appears to need a verb, but it is the definition of ‘this program’ and is OK.
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