Notes: Hiya. I'm in 9th grade and I made this poem for my portfolio. My friends told me it's good so I decided to post it. Tell me what you think..
Tears roll down my cheeks when I’m alone As I cry in my bed, facing the world all on my own I dream of a place of sanity Where all my pains will be put to an end Not in a dark and sullen place like this So I would no longer need to pretend I hide my emotions under fake ones As my heart suffers deep inside The reason of my existence is still unknown But I hope someday this hell will be overthrown Sometimes I fear that I would never recover That I would never wake up from this nightmare I dream of being a bird so I could fly But it never happens even when I try I struggle for love and happiness Still, all I get are despair and loneliness I hope someday these eyes of mine will dry So that finally, for once, I wouldn’t cry
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I think it is an excellent poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.
— Maj
I think it is an excellent poem.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
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