A dream

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Last night, Coco dreamt that she was sranding on a cloud. There was a colourful rainbow beside her. The rainbow has striking colours of red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple and indigo. The rainbow was stretched across the clouds. There were many birds flying around the clouds.

She decided to walk on the rainbow. She walked delightedly. It seems like it is never going to end. Then, she saw the end of the walk. She saw a huge silver pot. She ran towards it hurriedly.

Then, she opened the lid of the silver pot. Coco was surprised. She saw a lot of jewellery. She was excited. So she began to grab some jewellery. Suddenly she fall down to the ground.

When she woke up, she realised that it was just a dream. She was disappointed because her dream has shattered into pieces. She wished she could have the dream again and she went back to sleep.