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My soul_my eyes Posted 21 years ago
a cry for peace
I saw the face of a bruised soul
the tears he choked on, as he explained to the world
his weapons were nothing more, than some pittyful rocks
some the size of pebbels, that I used to search for
only to watch them bounce off the pond, as the geese flew off.
But his rocks, meant something more
a cry for freedom, for a land that was no more
Bounded in a hell hole, he now calls home
he chucked the rocks with all his might
against the fired bullets, that now decorate the city walls.
For every broken window, there lays a broken heart
of a widowed mother, crying from afar
watching the bullets bury in his trembling heart
a cry for freedom, as the palestinian youth falls.
"all we had were stones against your nuclear weapons and guns"
~dying youth
A cry for peace will never be enough, lets break these molds and unify as one
before the world trembles and falls.
the tears he choked on, as he explained to the world
his weapons were nothing more, than some pittyful rocks
some the size of pebbels, that I used to search for
only to watch them bounce off the pond, as the geese flew off.
But his rocks, meant something more
a cry for freedom, for a land that was no more
Bounded in a hell hole, he now calls home
he chucked the rocks with all his might
against the fired bullets, that now decorate the city walls.
For every broken window, there lays a broken heart
of a widowed mother, crying from afar
watching the bullets bury in his trembling heart
a cry for freedom, as the palestinian youth falls.
"all we had were stones against your nuclear weapons and guns"
~dying youth
A cry for peace will never be enough, lets break these molds and unify as one
before the world trembles and falls.
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Hello MSME Just a couple of typos: pittyful > pitiful pebbels > pebbles he chucked ] I'm not sure about 'chucked' - it's usually a 'weak' kind of throwing against the fired bullets ] maybe 'spent bullets'? there lays > there lies lets > let's See you, MrP
- Hello MSME Just a couple of typos: pittyful > pitiful pebbels > pebbles he chucked ] I'm not sure about 'chucked' - it's usually a 'weak' kind of throwing against the fired bullets ] maybe 'spent bullets'?
- there lays > there lies lets > let's See you, MrP
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Hello MSME
Just a couple of typos:
pittyful > pitiful
pebbels > pebbles
he chucked ] I'm not sure about 'chucked' - it's usually a 'weak' kind of throwing
against the fired bullets ] maybe 'spent bullets'?
there lays > there lies
lets > let's
See you,
MrP
Just a couple of typos:
pittyful > pitiful
pebbels > pebbles
he chucked ] I'm not sure about 'chucked' - it's usually a 'weak' kind of throwing
against the fired bullets ] maybe 'spent bullets'?
there lays > there lies
lets > let's
See you,
MrP
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