Is Does my sentence sound correct? Yes, it looks good, though a comma can go after "attempt" to join the dependent clause. Was it a suicide attempt, or a cry for help?
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Argo80I want to know if the person really wanted to kill herself or just wanted to draw attention to herself.Wouldn't be correct to use she in
Odessa Dawn Argo80I want to know if the person really wanted to kill herself or just wanted to draw attention to herself.Wouldn't be correct to use she instead of 'the person'? Or leave 'the person' as is, but change herself to himself?Depending on what had gone before, it might well be possible to use 'she' instead of 'the person'.