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Argo80 Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary

a cry for help

Hi,

I want to know if the person really wanted to kill herself or just wanted to draw attention to herself.

Is my sentence sound correct?

Was it a suicide attempt or a cry for help?

Thank you in advance.
  

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Is Does my sentence sound correct? Yes, it looks good, though a comma can go after "attempt" to join the dependent clause. Was it a suicide attempt, or a cry for help?

  • Is Does my sentence sound correct?
  • Yes, it looks good, though a comma can go after "attempt" to join the dependent clause.
  • Was it a suicide attempt, or a cry for help?
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Is Does my sentence sound correct?


Yes, it looks good, though a comma can go after "attempt" to join the dependent clause.

Was it a suicide attempt, or a cry for help?
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The second clause is not a dependent clause.
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Argo80I want to know if the person really wanted to kill herself or just wanted to draw attention to herself.
Wouldn't be correct to use she in
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Odessa Dawn Argo80I want to know if the person really wanted to kill herself or just wanted to draw attention to herself.Wouldn't be correct to use she instead of 'the person'? Or leave 'the person' as is, but change herself to himself?
Depending on what had gone before, it might well be possible to use 'she' instead of 'the person'.

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