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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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A cozy nature trip
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The next day, we started out early in the morning to the Qingjing Farm. Its cloudy mists at dawn was like a perfect painting. The wide grassy plain is the most popular site. The weather was mild and there were herds of sheep grazing on the land. We watched the herds of cows and sheep on their leisurely walks, sat on the grass and watch the flying kites, or just plain savor the sweet feeling of being free to do whatever we want. The sheep here are very friendly; visitors usually have their pictures taken with them. Then there was the sheep shearing show for the audience’s enjoyment. It provided a cozy and enjoyable nature trip for all visitors. It was a happy memory. I hope I can go back there again.
The next day, we started out early in the morning to the Qingjing Farm. Its cloudy mists at dawn was like a perfect painting. The wide grassy plain is the most popular site. The weather was mild and there were herds of sheep grazing on the land. We watched the herds of cows and sheep on their leisurely walks, sat on the grass and watch the flying kites, or just plain savor the sweet feeling of being free to do whatever we want. The sheep here are very friendly; visitors usually have their pictures taken with them. Then there was the sheep shearing show for the audience’s enjoyment. It provided a cozy and enjoyable nature trip for all visitors. It was a happy memory. I hope I can go back there again.
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The next day, we started out early in the morning to the Qingjing Farm. Its cloudy mists at dawn was like a perfect painting. The wide grassy plain is the most popular site.
- The next day, we started out early in the morning to the Qingjing Farm.
- Its cloudy mists at dawn was like a perfect painting.
- The wide grassy plain is the most popular site.
- The weather was mild and there were herds of sheep grazing on the land.
- We watched the herds of cows and sheep on their leisurely walks, sat on the grass and watch the flying kites, or just plain savor the sweet feeling of being free to do whatever we want.
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The next day, we started out early in the morning to the Qingjing Farm. Its cloudy mists at dawn was like a perfect painting. The wide grassy plain is the most popular site. The weather was mild and there were herds of sheep grazing on the land. We watched the herds of cows and sheep on their leisurely walks, sat on the grass and watch the flying kites, or just plain savor the
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The next day, we started out early in the morning for the Qingjing Farm. Its cloudy mists at dawn is like a perfect painting. The wide grassy plain is the most popular site. The weather was mild and there were herds of sheep grazing on the land. We watched the herds of cows and sheep on their leisurely walks, sat on the grass and watched the flying kites, or just plain savo
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Its cloudy mists at dawn were like a perfect painting.
It provided an enjoyable nature trip for all visitors. It was a happy memory. I hope I can go back there again.
Very good. You corrected some by yourself. Some of the verbs needn't be past, though, if the condition is still true (the sheep are friendly and visitors have their pictures taken) because i
It provided an enjoyable nature trip for all visitors. It was a happy memory. I hope I can go back there again.
Very good. You corrected some by yourself. Some of the verbs needn't be past, though, if the condition is still true (the sheep are friendly and visitors have their pictures taken) because i
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