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Levis1 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

A couple sentences

Can you say: Why I love traveling so much is 'cause you find things in different countries where you don't find anywhere else like this delicious cake that's only found in Starbucks Korea. FYI, this is my third consecutive day eating the same cake for breakfast!
  

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I think you cannot use 'why' that way and you should use some replacements like 'the reason' there. Use 'because' instead of ''cause'. And please don't use 'FYI'.

— Anon203c8

  • I think you cannot use 'why' that way and you should use some replacements like 'the reason' there.
  • Use 'because' instead of ''cause'.
  • And please don't use 'FYI'.
  • It's not formal.
  • Use "For your information'.
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I think you cannot use 'why' that way and you should use some replacements like 'the reason' there.
Use 'because' instead of ''cause'.
And please don't use 'FYI'. It's not formal. Use "For your information'.
I'd also add a period in your text this way: ' ... any where else. Like this ...'.
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Can a native speaker take a look at the sentences for me? Thank you.
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levis1Why I love traveling so much is 'cause you find things in different countries where you don't find anywhere else like this delicious cake that's only found in Starbucks Korea. FYI, this is my third consecutive day eating the same cake for breakfast!
The reason I love traveling so much is that you find things in different countries that
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Try to avoid a repetition of the 'reason idea. The following are not good style:

The reason I do X is because ...
Why I do X is because ...
The reason why I do X us ...
The reason why I do X is because ...
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