A couple of Lovers

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- My wife and I had a great time on my last holiday in Hawaii. There were lots of beautiful days full of wind, sunshine and chill also. We took part in many activities together. We played on swings and slides. Our tour guide also told us a romantic love story about a couple of lovers.

- Are there sentences grammatical?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Namsteven

Ed_shaw · Accepted Answer

My wife and I had a great time (our) my last holiday in Hawaii. There were lots of beautiful days full of wind, sunshine and ( brisk temperatures.) We took part in many activities together. We played on swings and slides. Our tour guide (delete also) told us a romantic love story about a couple of lovers.

Just a couple of things.

Zafar142003 · Answer

My wife and I had a great time on my last holiday in Hawaii. There were lots of beautiful days full of wind, sunshine and even chill. We took part in many activities together. We played on swings and slides. Also, our tour guide told us a romantic love story about a couple of lovers.

Are these corrections ok?

Ed_shaw · Answer

You'll be all right with that paragraph. The reason I considered chill as a poor choice of words is because chill as a noun has a negative connotation. If it is the word you wish to use, then go ahead.
I changed my to our for reasons that should be obvious. If you prefer my, there can be no opposition on grammatical grounds.

Mister Micawber · Answer

And 'breeze' is pleasant; 'wind' is not'.

Zafar142003 · Answer

It certainly is!

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