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Sofia.marchi Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A composition about Moscow
I've written a composition about Moscow. I'll be very pleased, if you read and comment on it.
"You must know that
Moscow is a very big city, but you may not imagine how beautiful it
is. There are a lot of historical sites, lovely parks and exciting
museums in Moscow. There are so many things to do and see here, that
it may be difficult to decide where to go first.
If you'd like to
see the ancient buildings you'd better go straight to the centre of
the city. You can just walk along the old streets and take some
photos. If you are interested in art and Russian culture, you'll
enjoy visiting museums, such as the State Tretyakov Gallery and the
State Historical Museum. You can also spend your time in one of the
parks of Moscow. For example, in the State Museum-Reserve Tsaritsyno
you'll be able to see amazing palaces, listen to singing fountains
and watch ducks and swans swimming in the pond.
I'm sure that
spending your summer holiday in Moscow will give you an unforgettable
experience."
"You must know that
Moscow is a very big city, but you may not imagine how beautiful it
is. There are a lot of historical sites, lovely parks and exciting
museums in Moscow. There are so many things to do and see here, that
it may be difficult to decide where to go first.
If you'd like to
see the ancient buildings you'd better go straight to the centre of
the city. You can just walk along the old streets and take some
photos. If you are interested in art and Russian culture, you'll
enjoy visiting museums, such as the State Tretyakov Gallery and the
State Historical Museum. You can also spend your time in one of the
parks of Moscow. For example, in the State Museum-Reserve Tsaritsyno
you'll be able to see amazing palaces, listen to singing fountains
and watch ducks and swans swimming in the pond.
I'm sure that
spending your summer holiday in Moscow will give you an unforgettable
experience."
Top answer
marchi "You must know that Moscow is a very big city, but you may not imagine how beautiful it is Regarding your first sentence, I'd prefer to rewrite it as follows: You would probably have known the fact that Moscow is a very big city, but you could hardly imagine its beauty if you haven't visited it yet. p/s: it's merely a personal preference. cheers.
- marchi "You must know that Moscow is a very big city, but you may not imagine how beautiful it is Regarding your first sentence, I'd prefer to rewrite it as follows: You would probably have known the fact that Moscow is a very big city, but you could hardly imagine its beauty if you haven't visited it yet.
- p/s: it's merely a personal preference.
- cheers.
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Hello there,
You would probably have known the fact that Moscow is a very big city, but you could hardly imagine its beauty if you haven't visited it yet.
sofia.marchi"You must know that Moscow is a very big city, but you may not imagine how beautiful it isRegarding your first sentence, I'd prefer to rewrite it as follows:
You would probably have known the fact that Moscow is a very big city, but you could hardly imagine its beauty if you haven't visited it yet.
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