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A common...

A common question asks, "Why do some people prefer traditional marriage while others prefer modern marriage?" This question is asked by many people. For people who prefer traditional marriage, getting married traditionally is more appropriate than getting married modernly; however, for people who prefer modern marriage, getting married modernly is more better than getting married traditionally.

There are some reasons why some people prefer traditional marriage, and why others prefer modern marriage.


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Kinda No. Im not being mean, mate, rather i wanna help. But, i believe in honesty.

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  • Kinda No.
  • Im not being mean, mate, rather i wanna help.
  • But, i believe in honesty.
  • The repeating the two primary phrases each time confuses the reader, basically causing a distraction from your main point, which I'd make a bit clearer with an additional sentence or two, maybe a stand-alone paragraph?
  • I'd use the Full-terms whilst beginning, and using as an example, maybe Modern vs.
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Kinda No. Im not being mean, mate, rather i wanna help. But, i believe in honesty.

The repeating the two primary phrases each time confuses the reader, basically causing a distraction from your main point, which I'd make a bit clearer with an additional sentence or two, maybe a stand-alone paragraph?

I'd use the Full-terms whilst beginning, and using as an example, maybe

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A common question is, "Why do some people prefer traditional marriage while others prefer modern marriage?" This question is asked by many people. (Repetitive, redundant. If a question is common, then ,by definition, it is asked by many people.) For people who prefer a traditional marriage, getting married traditionally is more appropriate than getting married

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