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Ryotaro Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A comment about a website

Very good contents but the entry to this site from outside is only external links in news articles about economics or technologies, which means that the website does not get attention from various consumers or potential business partners.

Can you please correct grammatical errors?

Thank you,

Ryo
  

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Dear Ryotaro, Here are some grammatical, style and syntax suggestions. Very good contents , but outside entry to the site appears to be by external links from news articles about economics or technology only. This means that the website may not get enough attention from various consumers or potential business partners.

— JohnParis

  • Dear Ryotaro, Here are some grammatical, style and syntax suggestions.
  • Very good contents , but outside entry to the site appears to be by external links from news articles about economics or technology only.
  • This means that the website may not get enough attention from various consumers or potential business partners.
  • John
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Dear Ryotaro,

Here are some grammatical, style and syntax suggestions.

Very good contents, but outside entry to the site appears to be by external links from news articles about economics
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