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Clee62 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
a comma splice sentence?
Hi,
Just curious if this is a comma splice in the following sentence and will it fix it if I break the sentence into two at the second "and"? thanks!
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting, and problem solving abilities on a daily basis, my work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position.
Just curious if this is a comma splice in the following sentence and will it fix it if I break the sentence into two at the second "and"? thanks!
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting, and problem solving abilities on a daily basis, my work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position.
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) as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting , and problem solving abilities on a daily basis , my work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position. I have highlighted the problems in this run-on sentence.
- ) as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting , and problem solving abilities on a daily basis , my work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position.
- I have highlighted the problems in this run-on sentence.
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Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software worked (Did software work?) as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting, and problem solving abilities on a daily basis, my work experience and education therefore make me
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Yes, this needs new punctuation, but not at the location you mention. Here is how I would write this:
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software, having worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble-shooting and problem-solving abilities on a daily basis. My work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for t
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software, having worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble-shooting and problem-solving abilities on a daily basis. My work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for t
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sorry,
The original sentence should be this.
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software and worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting, and problem solving abilities on a daily basis, my work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position.
Will this be correct?
Additionally, I am proficient
The original sentence should be this.
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software and worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble shooting, and problem solving abilities on a daily basis, my work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position.
Will this be correct?
Additionally, I am proficient
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No, you still need to break the sentence where I suggested, otherwise it is too long and confusing. However, if you don't want to word it as I first suggested, try this:
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software. I have worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble-shooting and problem-solving abilities on a daily basis. My work exp
Additionally, I am proficient with computer systems and software. I have worked as a computer repair technician utilizing trouble-shooting and problem-solving abilities on a daily basis. My work exp
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Additionally, I am quite proficient with computer systems and software because I worked as a computer repair technician honing my trouble-shooting and problem-solving abilities on a daily basis. My work experience and education therefore make me an excellent candidate for this position.
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