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Abdulla AbdulAziz Al-h Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

A comma placement that I need help with

Hello guys:)
I would like to know where the comma should be place in the sentence below:

This feeling of nostaligia I repeatedly feel brings me to my knees everytime I think about the home I can't return to.

Should there be a comma before the word "brings" ?
Or is the sentence, in general, not correct anyway?

Thank you very much in advance Emotion: smile
  

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This feeling of nostalgia (that) I repeatedly feel brings me to my knees every time I think about the home I can't return to. This is correct English, but I would consider deleting "(that) I repeatedly feel". This seems a bit unnecessary given that you already say "every time".

  • This feeling of nostalgia (that) I repeatedly feel brings me to my knees every time I think about the home I can't return to.
  • This is correct English, but I would consider deleting "(that) I repeatedly feel".
  • This seems a bit unnecessary given that you already say "every time".
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This feeling of nostalgia (that) I repeatedly feel brings me to my knees every time I think about the home I can't return to.

This is correct English, but I would consider deleting "(that) I repeatedly feel". This seems a bit unnecessary given that you already say "every time".

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