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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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A choice between two options
Hi, can someone please give some feedback on the following writing and please select one between two options?
1. Set in the early 1990s, which is the critical period for Malaysian Indians history, who are forsaken by the estate owners and are forced to move to the cities and survive under harsh circumstances. The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy and his relationships with his father, Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala and local gangster Dorai.
2. It is the early 1990s, a severely critical period for Malaysian Indians. They are forsaken by the estate owners and are forced to move to the cities, made to survive under harsh circumstances. The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy, and his relationship with his father Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala, and local gangster Dorai.
1. Set in the early 1990s, which is the critical period for Malaysian Indians history, who are forsaken by the estate owners and are forced to move to the cities and survive under harsh circumstances. The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy and his relationships with his father, Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala and local gangster Dorai.
2. It is the early 1990s, a severely critical period for Malaysian Indians. They are forsaken by the estate owners and are forced to move to the cities, made to survive under harsh circumstances. The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy, and his relationship with his father Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala, and local gangster Dorai.
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#2 is much better than #1 2. It is the early 1990s, a severely critical period for Malaysian Indians. They are forsaken by the estate owners , forced to move to the cities, and made to survive under harsh circumstances.
- #2 is much better than #1 2.
- It is the early 1990s, a severely critical period for Malaysian Indians.
- They are forsaken by the estate owners , forced to move to the cities, and made to survive under harsh circumstances.
- The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy, and his relationship with his father Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala, and local gangster Dorai.
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#2 is much better than #1
2. It is the early 1990s, a severely critical period for Malaysian Indians. They are forsaken by the estate owners, forced to move to the cities, and made to survive under harsh circumstances. The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy, and his relationship with his father Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala, and local gangster Dor
2. It is the early 1990s, a severely critical period for Malaysian Indians. They are forsaken by the estate owners, forced to move to the cities, and made to survive under harsh circumstances. The story follows a mischievous 12-year-old boy named Appoy, and his relationship with his father Maniam, and his uncles – former drug addict Bala, and local gangster Dor
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