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Marold Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

A check of one sentence

"The reasons why I am applying are that I have already had a large number of professional experiences in this field, knowing in particular how to deal with all kinds of people in the position of a manager."

Is this sentence correct?

Thanks in advance.Emotion: smile
  

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I suggest The reason I'm applying for this job is that I already have extensive experience in this field, particularly in dealing with people in managerial positions. Is this what you want to say?

— Ivanhr

  • I suggest The reason I'm applying for this job is that I already have extensive experience in this field, particularly in dealing with people in managerial positions.
  • Is this what you want to say?
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I suggest

The reason I'm applying for this job is that I already have extensive experience in this field, particularly in dealing with people in managerial positions.

Is this what you want to say?
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I mean to have a knack of dealing with/treating all kinds of people (all social classes; all people), to run a business that are under you in a company, to give them orders, to have people under you as a manager, .
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Perhaps

The reason I'm applying for this job is that I already have extensive experience in this field, having worked as a manager for many yers. (if you have managerial experience)

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The reason I'm applying for this job is that I already have extensive experience in this field, having worked with people for may years.
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The construction "perfect -ing form" appeals to me. I will try to include that in my essay.

Thank you for the suggestion, I appreciate it!
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Since you are clearly aiming for a formal register, you may want to avoid the contraction and include the first that (why is redundant) for consistency.

The reason that I am applying for this job is that…

Or, to avoid wordiness,


I am applying for this job because…
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