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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
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A celebration of Deepavali
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(a) Last Friday morning, it was cool and breezy. John woke up in the early morning. He made the bed clean and tidy. He was very excited to celebrate Deepavali.
(b) He brushed his teeth and changed into new clothes after making his bed. He looked fresh and smart. After having breakfast with his parents, he went out together (with them).
(c) They went to a famous temple near his house. They were devout / godly Hindu and prayed sincerely. After an hour, they visited their relatives' houses. They greeted mutually / each other and chatted happily. They went home in the evening.
(a) Last Friday morning, it was cool and breezy. John woke up in the early morning. He made the bed clean and tidy. He was very excited to celebrate Deepavali.
(b) He brushed his teeth and changed into new clothes after making his bed. He looked fresh and smart. After having breakfast with his parents, he went out together (with them).
(c) They went to a famous temple near his house. They were devout / godly Hindu and prayed sincerely. After an hour, they visited their relatives' houses. They greeted mutually / each other and chatted happily. They went home in the evening.
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(a) Last Friday morning was cool and breezy. John woke up early. He made his bed neatly.
- (a) Last Friday morning was cool and breezy.
- John woke up early.
- He made his bed neatly.
- He was very excited about celebrating Deepavali.
- (b) He brushed his teeth and changed into new clothes.
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(a) Last Friday morning was cool and breezy. John woke up early. He made his bed neatly. He was very excited about celebrating Deepavali.
(b) He brushed his teeth and changed into new clothes. He looked fresh and smart. After having breakfast with his parents, they went out together.
(c) They went to a famous temple near his house. They were devout Hindus and prayed fervently. A
(b) He brushed his teeth and changed into new clothes. He looked fresh and smart. After having breakfast with his parents, they went out together.
(c) They went to a famous temple near his house. They were devout Hindus and prayed fervently. A
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