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Saltukhan Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
A Business Letter-need correction
1) i need your corrections. i also want to tell the information in this text in a better way.
please help me.
Dear Sir,
I am export-import responsible of xxx company.
Thank you for visiting our area in the fair last week. We would be honoured to work with you.
We are the largest panel door producer. We have been producing various kinds of interior doors. Premdor Turkey is accredited to ISO9001 quality standarts and is actively developing a constructive and credible environmental strategy.
I added some documents presenting our products. Please have a glance on them and share your opinions about our products.
If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to contact me.
Best Regards
2) i want to say: is this true?
I am export-import responsible of xxx company. I have started to work in this position instead of Ms. Brown.
please help me.
Dear Sir,
I am export-import responsible of xxx company.
Thank you for visiting our area in the fair last week. We would be honoured to work with you.
We are the largest panel door producer. We have been producing various kinds of interior doors. Premdor Turkey is accredited to ISO9001 quality standarts and is actively developing a constructive and credible environmental strategy.
I added some documents presenting our products. Please have a glance on them and share your opinions about our products.
If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to contact me.
Best Regards
2) i want to say: is this true?
I am export-import responsible of xxx company. I have started to work in this position instead of Ms. Brown.
Top answer
Here are some suggestions. Dear Sir, I am the person responsible for export s and import s responsible of *** company. I have recently replaced Ms.
- Here are some suggestions.
- Dear Sir, I am the person responsible for export s and import s responsible of *** company.
- I have recently replaced Ms.
- Brown who used to be in this position.
- Thank you for visiting our booth area in the fair last week.
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Here are some suggestions.
Dear Sir,
I am the person responsible for exports and importsresponsible of *** company. I have recently replaced Ms. Brown who used to be in this position.
Thank you for visiting our bootharea in the fair last week. We would be honoured to work with you.
We are the largest panel door
Dear Sir,
I am the person responsible for exports and imports
Thank you for visiting our booth
We are the largest panel door
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