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Vasuarm Posted 17 years ago
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A Bright Sky

Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.

Good god! I now saw an American lady coming from the crowd to our rescue. Introducing herself as Dorothea Lessing, she said she knew what we were searching for, and prodded us to ‘go watch the fireworks’. Now, lit by the fireworks, the sky looked more ominous and showed a pot-pourri of colors. Presently, sparks of light traveled across the sky and transformed into shapes of lions, tigers, elephants and deer. We then, saw a fully blossomed flower with bees swarming it. There were shadows of men and women holding hands, and an American flag was found fluttering. Crowds screamed with joy and excitement. We stood mesmerized unable to take our eyes from the shining sky.
  

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Good ***! I now saw an American lady coming from the crowd to our rescue. Good ***!

  • Good ***!
  • I now saw an American lady coming from the crowd to our rescue.
  • Good ***!
  • I saw an American lady coming from the crowd to our rescue.
  • Introducing herself as Dorothea Lessing, she said she knew what we were searching for, and prodded us to ‘go watch the fireworks'.
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Good ***! I now saw an American lady coming from the crowd to our rescue.
Good ***! I saw an American lady coming from the crowd to our rescue.

Introducing herself as Dorothea Lessing, she said she knew what we were searching for, and prodded us to ‘go watch the fireworks'.
She introduced herself as Dorthea Lessing. She said she knew what we were searching for and prodded us t

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