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Pieter Posted 23 years ago

A brand new one ( freshly translated)

Cosmopolitan ( to a nationalistcosmopolitanhungarian friend)

During the Anthem. a sceptical smile I've seen.

In Madrid the wind's brooming the trees.
Rubber made in Rome in your white panties.
Fish in the Balaton stroke you as a Chrysler's seats.
A New York broker with bacon, onions, smiles as he eats.
Flowery field in a currant-coloured laptop.
Your Skoda has a Porsche- door, a Lancia's black top.

I saw you in a cosmical redwhiteandgreen dream.
  

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lol funny. I may have read it to quickly... Tell me if I am wrong

  • lol funny.
  • I may have read it to quickly...
  • Tell me if I am wrong
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lol funny. I may have read it to quickly... Tell me if I am wrong
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According to the colours of the flag in could be written to a Bossi- like nationalist too. The Balaton changed to Lago di Como, and the rubber in the panties into made in Paris.
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I think the real sweetness and spontaniety of the poem is lost when u translate it from one language to the other. Maybe u should try writing more original poems in English.Sorry to say this.

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