A better phrasing

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Hi

Could you please tell me which one of the following is more natural and correct?

You could have come up with a better phrasing of the sentence.

You could have come up with better phrasing of the sentence.

Thanks,

Tom

Dynamicsci · Accepted Answer

I would use the first one.

I would also use "You could have come up with a better way of phrasing the sentence."

Anonymous · Answer

William shakespeare's play “Hamlet” centers around characters that manipulate, lie, and murder each other to get what they desire. The play was set in motion through the deception of Claudius. For his **** for power was so great; it blinded to the point of self deception, leading to his death. His deceitful demeanor is a prime example of what comes around goes around.

Hamlet’s father wa

Hamlet’s father was the king of Denmark before his brother Claudius. Hamlet was visited by a ghost form of his father revealing his brother was the one who murdered him. “ O wicked wit and gifts, that have the power so to seduce! won to his shameful ****...Thus was I, sleeping, by a brother’s hand.”(act 1, scene 5) Claudius not only poisoned his brother, but he also suducced Gurtured, his wife, into marrying him.

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