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Raffy Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A bad influence - please proof read I have bad grammar skills

I'm writing an essay for my introduction to writing class and my topic is "a bad influence". Like I said I have bad grammar skills and I hope someone is willing to proof read my work.

Here what I wrote


There are many bad influences in the world, ranging from people to drugs and entertainment like television. A bad influence could mean

followingthe wrong crowd and not showing the right example for others. Also, influence could force someone or put them under pressure like

taking drugs. Abad influences doesn't neccessarily mean it influence someone, but it does send off the message to kill, steal, drink, alcoholm smoke,

etc. The one thing that I think that is a bad influence to everyone is drugs.

Many people have ruined their life by taking illegal drugs, it starts from just taking one and then it's all down hill from there because of a word

"addiction". There are many types of drugs of drugs. There are illegal drugs that are used as medicines, such as prescriptions drugs or

over-the-counter and there are illegal drugs that you are not supposed to use, buy, or sell. Illegal drugs can do many things to a person body

altering how the brain works, sudden mood changes, paranoid, secretive, unexpected aggression or unsociable. Many illegal drugs are easy to

obtain for a cheap price, probably cheaper than alcohol.

Younger youths might be tempted to take drugs because they feel it neccessary to look more cool, fit in, or solve problems. The truth is I don't

think drugs solve problems, when the drug wears off the problem still remain or become worse. Younger youth like to have a good time and try

out new things, some will try out drugs for the good time, fit in, or curious to find out what it's affects are. I think the main people responsible for

bad influence are the people around you. The influence of peers can be a huge but I still think its your choice to make the decision.

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Thanks in advance. Comments and suggestion such as how I can expand my essay are even more appericiated.


  

Top answer

There are many bad influences in the world, ranging from people to drugs and entertainment like television. A bad influence could mean following the wrong crowd and not showing (wording) the right example for others. Also, influence could force someone or put them under pressure like taking drugs.

— Julielai

  • There are many bad influences in the world, ranging from people to drugs and entertainment like television.
  • A bad influence could mean following the wrong crowd and not showing (wording) the right example for others.
  • Also, influence could force someone or put them under pressure like taking drugs.
  • A bad influences doesn't neccessarily mean it influence (verb form) someone, but it does send off the message to kill, steal, drink, alcoholm smoke, etc.
  • The one thing that I think that is a bad influence to everyone is drugs.
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There are many bad influences in the world, ranging from people to drugs and entertainment like television. A bad influence could mean following the wrong crowd and not showing (wording) the right example for others. Also, influence could force someone or put them under pressure like taking drugs. A bad influences doesn't neccessarily mean it influence (verb form) someone, but i
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