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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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5 years of existing..how to say correctly
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Within five years of existing (the?) Awards Ceremony and concert show program a lot of pop stars participated, such as: ...
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Within five years of existing (the?) Awards Ceremony and concert show program a lot of pop stars participated, such as: ...
What can be wrong in there?and how can it be improved?
How does it sound?
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Within the first five years of its existence, the award ceremony and concert program boasted the participation of many pop stars, such as: ...
- Within the first five years of its existence, the award ceremony and concert program boasted the participation of many pop stars, such as: ...
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Within the first five years of its existence, the award ceremony and concert program boasted the participation of many pop stars, such as: ...
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