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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

5 sentence I need help with please.

How would you write the following? I'm not sure how a native speaker would have said these so could you give me your version please?

1/ If I hurry up, I'll wait in front of fewer people in line. I know the waits going to be long so if I can cut a few people off the wait by getting there a few minutes earlier, why not.

2/ The line is so long that it reaches the store on the next block.

3/ I've had a drop in revenue compared to last year which is why I've had a heard time paying my taxes. I am here to ask for a payment plan.

4/ People waiting in line all have requests about/regarding their payments.

Does the 'before clause go with the first part of the sentence? Is the sentence natural? Is is grammatically correct to say'is due is past'?

5/ Today is the last day to ask to pay taxes in installments before the full payment is due. Once that date [on which full payment is due is]past, your request for a payment plan is denied and you are slapped with a fee.

Thanks in advance
  

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1/ If I hurry up, I'll wait behind fewer people in line. I know the wait's going to be long, so if I can cut a few people off the wait by getting there a few minutes earlier. Why not?

  • 1/ If I hurry up, I'll wait behind fewer people in line.
  • I know the wait's going to be long, so if I can cut a few people off the wait by getting there a few minutes earlier.
  • Why not?
  • 2/ The line is so long that it reaches the store on the next block.
  • 3/ I've had a drop in revenue compared to last year, which is why I've had a hard time paying my taxes.
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1/ If I hurry up, I'll wait behind fewer people in line. I know the wait's going to be long, so if I can cut a few people off the wait by getting there a few minutes earlier. Why not?

2/ The line is so long that it reaches the store on the next block.

3/ I've had a drop in revenue compared to last year, which is why I've had a hard time paying my taxes. I am here

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